Gila's Cave

In the interest of trying to improve my writing, I would like to get some feedback. I know I'm a good, solid writer (when I wanna be) but I want to see what I can do to improve. As part of that endeavour, I'd like to find out what folks have ever not liked about my stories - other than wrong fandom, wrong pairing, so on.

Feel free to leave anonymous comments; I don't mind. And if you make me cry, I won't tell. ;-)

I know a few things I can work on - but for all I know I'm doing things I'm not even aware of that could make my stories better. (Crossposted from my person LJ.)